Can you please check this paragraph if it makes sense?
March 14, 2010 by
Filed under asean business
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It has been a great pleasure to welcome you to Kuala Lumpur for Renewable Energy dialog. I am very happy that The Dialog has been concluded this evening. I believe that the dialogue is very beneficial for all delegates and I hope that all of the information exchange and experience sharing in the dialogue will motivate bigger investment in Renewable Energy business and at the same time will strengthen the cooperation in natural gas business in Asean+3 countries.
Well, they had to get everybody out of the room somehow and just saying “Good Bye, you can go now” probably didn’t work.
It has been a great pleasure to welcome you to Kuala Lumpur for the Renewable Energy dialog. I am glad you all have been able to attend this event. I believe that this kind of discussion is very beneficial for all attendees and I hope that the information exchange and shared experiences will motivate larger investment in Renewable Energy business and strengthen cooperation in natural gas in Asean+3 countries.
i think it exsplaines its self…….
It makes sence, though the second sentence makes it sound like you can’t wait for it to end (because it’s been terrible).
It has been a great pleasure to welcome you to Kuala Lumpur for the Renewable Energy (conference?). I am very happy that The Conference has been concluded this evening, (with great progress?). I believe that the dialogue is very beneficial for all delegates and I hope that all of the information exchange and experience sharing in this conference will create a larger investment in Renewable Energy and at the same time will strengthen the cooperation in the natural gas business in Asean+3 countries.